In this drawn out and far fetched tale of the afterlife, Dan Nelson attached his mind to Jeannie Stanforth minutes after his death. Shocked by the fact he was still alive, so to speak, Dan familiarized himself with his new situation. Jeannie and Dan soon discovered she wasn't the only person with an attached mind. A foundation was formed with family and friends to gather information and proof of this strange existence, to eventually present the reverie to the world. However, before they had the opportunity, their lives were threatened and they barely escaped death. Violence and turmoil became the state of affairs after their publication.
This story would be improved by a professional editor. 2 Stars
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